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Title: Freedom Post by: Comet on May 23, 2010 11:11 pm Just wrote this today at work think it might of been channelled! ;D
We have the power to fly and soar above the clouds To be in control of your Destiny Speak firm, speak loud and speak from the heart Say what's on your mind and Live Free Be free to explore the real you Be free to Dream, Learn, Love and Grow The journey is yours to explore freely Keep an open mind and forgive all Be in control of your Journey and you will be free Let your mind explore the power within your soul Let your heart love and your soul sing Let your spirit fly and be free (Copyright Comet) 5-10 Title: Re: Freedom Post by: Katze on May 24, 2010 07:15 am hi Comet,
Thank you for sharing your poem on Freedom ! It is very nice and I agree with you, I think it was channeled too. It sounds like something you would write , yet not like how you would say it, if that makes any sense ? Anyways, very nice and I look forward to more of your poetry ! I like all of it, but I like these lines especially : Quote Let your mind explore the power within your soul Let your heart love and your soul sing Let your spirit fly and be free (((hugs))) Into Blue Title: Re: Freedom Post by: Jitendra Hydonus on May 25, 2010 01:32 am Hi Comet thanks for sharing your poem with us. It reveals somethings about you and is thought provoking. Just thought i would add a couple things about my life. i have found that saying words with a soft voice yet with conviction has saved me some troubles that i have encountered in life. Sometimes when i do not know how to to speak with love; it is better to say nothing till i can speak with love. i remember listening to Paramahansa Yogananda talk. He talked loudly in his lectures but i don't think they had microphones at many of these lectures. He also spoke with the confidence of a Master. i no longer want to control my journey but hope to be in tune with divine order and put my wonderings to rest. These are my thoughts and may not reflect the meaning of your poem. 'Let your heart love and your soul sing'...... Steve Hydonus |