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Title: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Comet on Jun 22, 2009 01:18 pm
This was my first poem i ever did i got more but start here lol  ;D


The Beauty Of A Song

The song connects between our heart and soul
it can make the soul sing and our bodies dance.

The Harmony of a singers voice can be so Heavenly
almost like a voice of an Angel.

The Lyrics remind us of our lives we connect so well
with the way the singer sings it almost as they share
our pain! As if their pain was our own.

A song heals our hearts in ways other things
can not.

The beauty of a song touches our hearts forever ~


Comet


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Lauraa49 on Jun 22, 2009 05:42 pm
very nice hun..thanks for sharing this


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Katze on Jun 25, 2009 05:13 pm

Beautiful poem Comet ! 

This is my favorite line , so very true .



The beauty of a song touches our hearts forever ~

I will have to check out your other poems too, thanks.  :)


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Comet on Jun 26, 2009 03:21 am
Thanks Into Blue that is my fav part too  :)


The rest of my poetry is on my forum i wrote some new stuff recently i didn't even think i had it in me!! HEHE guess

I impressed myself there  ;D


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Jitendra Hydonus on Jun 26, 2009 04:09 am
Thanks for the poem Comet it gives me the inspiration to keep singin' and writing. These lines are the best for me because it is my goal to feel the pain of others and to heal the pain of others with the healing ways of love...

'The Lyrics remind us of our lives we connect so well
with the way the singer sings it almost as they share
our pain! As if their pain was our own.

A song heals our hearts in ways other things'
can not.


Love Steve






Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Comet on Jun 26, 2009 11:56 am
Thanks Steve your music is wonderful i need to check your music out again!


A friend asked me one time what music meant to me and the words just came out i was surpised didn't think i had it in me lol.

Quote
A song heals our hearts in ways other things'
can not.

I agree what is why i turn to music when in pain it soothes our hearts especially when i am terrible with words music speaks how i feel at times! I would be lost without it  :)

Rest of my poetry is on my site

Comet's Poetry
http://www.freedomtospeakloud.co.uk/showthread.php?t=39


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Comet on Jun 26, 2009 11:57 am
Thanks Laura i missed your post sorry hun


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Katze on Jun 28, 2009 04:17 am
Comet, I checked out your poetry on your forum, beautiful ! Keep on writing.  :)


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Comet on Jun 28, 2009 09:03 pm
 Hey thanks Into Blue actually i am leading up to something right now gonna do a blog post it on my forum i am finally in a great place in life and this is something i feel i need to do! Title it Comet's Story if i can help one person the way you and others helped me i will be happy!  I need to pm ya later   ;D


((hugs))



Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Spirit fox on Aug 29, 2009 05:40 pm
Great poem Comet, you have any more ?


The song connects between our heart and soul
it can make the soul sing and our bodies dance.


many thanks,
Spirit fox


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Comet on Sep 06, 2009 12:20 pm
Hi Spiritfox,


Thanks for the kind words! Right now most of my poetry is on my site i may post more here when i feel
comfortable enough to share  :) Yes i do have more  ;)

Comet


Title: Re: Beauty of a Song
Post by: Jitendra Hydonus on Sep 17, 2009 08:43 pm
i am always happy to see your presence here Comet.  When i do not have time to play instruments and write music i think of this thought: Sometimes life itself is our song and how we live and sing it can make it an inspiration and worthwhile for others.

Steve