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'Whispers from Eternity'

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« Reply #15 on: Dec 23, 2009 10:25 am »

I find parts of it confusing, for example:

"fresh diehard hopes burst into new, thirsty flames,
that swallowed up many a sturdy tree of my fresh powers"

and

"Now, gray ghosts of half-dead vitalities glide amid dark doubts"

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